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[FLUMPTY PAINTS THE WALLS . SWF]

i mean it's good but i would recommend finishing it instead of just posting the rough

pablothinghouse responds:

Fair enough but I doubt I'll finish it lol

[Montana Dad Episode 10: Origin Story]

This is kinda fun! A few things I'd recommend is that you could do a few more takes on voice lines to better the delivery and maybe try adding in some more actual animation, nothing crazy, I think something a bit more limited with few inbetweens would work for this actually. I just feel just a tiny bit of frame by frame would make this really fun to watch, das all!

avalanche24 responds:

Sure totally, I plant to incorporate live action shots along with animation the next episode. The next one is gonna be a big one and I have a ton of spare time nowadays, so I will be adding more animation and live action to it.

I know live action wasn't mentioned, but its frame by frame and something I've been having a growing interest in and it should also add some more pizazz to the final product.

[KEY-MAN!]

This has a LOT of potential! a little long in the tooth for my taste though, personally 7 or 8 minutes probably should've done it. But still, I love the character designs in this and hopefully when you come back to this concept you some more wacky shit with it cause i think that's when it will reach it's peak in terms of how far this can go! good stuff good stuff

BoyPorcelain responds:

The original script was looking more like 8 minutes long, but there was so much improv from the voice actors and so many unexpected things that it went well over the time I was expecting. But I now know for future how to make these things shorter, and for my own sanity, it will be shorter. Thanks for watching/commenting!